Tuesday, January 5, 2016

Tomorrow's Winning Picture

This scene was illustrated by someone who never read the book.  Luckily, she got a free copy after she drew the picture -- so NOW she knows if it makes sense.

Book 1 Chapter 3

As the middle-sized ogre, Laura, cleaned cobwebs around the chandelier, Cinderella poked her head in the dining room door and called, “Mind the candles. They’ll singe your . . .”
“Ouch!”  Laura cried.
“Skin.”  Cinderella finished her sentence. Too late.
Stephanie and Heather crowded close to their sister to inspect the burn. Laura had been grasping the chain that held the chandelier. Now, tiny red marks made a row on her forearm.
Heather turned her back to the chandelier as she soothed her sister and in doing so, bumped the chandelier with her shoulder. The light fixture swung away and then bumped back into her, lighting the end of a strand of hair on fire. She squeaked and tripped into her sisters.
All three girls lost their balance.
Heather, the tallest of them, grabbed for the only thing that might have kept her standing – the hoop from the old chandelier. It separated from the ceiling with a puff of dust and a rain of splinters.

Down they all fell in a heap, laughing all the way. Luckily, the flame in Heather’s lock of hair went out on the way down, leaving only a funny smell in the air. The girls, cobwebbed fingers, iron hoop and all, lay on the floor in a messy, giggling heap.